Friday, 28 July 2017

Betsensus #FootballsBiggestTip

OK, so I haven't posted in a while.  But I'm excited to announce that I'm involved in a new project: a community tipping website called Betsensus


What the hell is a Betsensus?
When three or more people contribute to a collective prediction: that's a Betsensus. Each member of a Team influences the final prediction by entering their own match score predictions.
It's also a unique and social way to form your weekend's accumulator, or competitive fun at work, with friends or family.
If you love fantasy football, I'm confident you will love this website too.  You can dip in and out each week, so it's less commital than the season long fantasy football and yet there is still a competitive side to it.

How is it scored?
The League shows all Teams ranked by % accuracy of their Betsensus predictions.
+10 (correct score)
+5 (correct result and goal difference)
+3 (Correct result only) and
-2 (incorrect result).

All Leagues and Team Rankings are weekly; except the Global Betsensus which provides all-time scores.

I'm looking forward to entering my predictions and see how I fare each week against everyone else - and see if the global betsensus is truly stronger than the individual!

Wednesday, 21 September 2016

September Update - Mr P the Pigeon

OK, so No Man's Sky got very boring very quickly.  I actually haven't played it since my last blog post about it.  It had huge potential and I still love the concept, but it was not a 50 pound game.  And worst of all, it crashed and crashed.  The developers have gone silent on social media, and so they should.  Good news is, I'm busy playing The Witcher 3, Destiny: Rise of Iron and next month is Battlefield 1.  Oh, and I also have the Death Star dlc for Battlefront.


On the writing front, I have finished my first children's book which I am seeking to get illustrated.  I am contacting my artistic friends, professionals and browsing the services on Fiverr ( but I am dubious about that site).  I'm also sending it off to publishers, but if that fails, which it most likely will, then I will self-publish. I’m very happy with the story and writing for children is also extra rewarding, helping/ encouraging them with reading as well as promoting good morals and life lessons through your stories.


Also, Garden Hopping is now available as a paperback through Amazon.  This is a collection of short stories and my novellas: The Gauntlet, and Looking for a Job.  It’s priced at 4 pound 50 pence, which is the cheapest I could put it for the length of the book.


Garden Hopping paperback edition 1
 

Friday, 12 August 2016

The Man in the Woods


We never dared to venture into the woods when it was dark.   The closest we ever got was to the fence.  We would turn our backs to the trees, then close our eyes and play a game of chicken – who was the bravest?  We were only eight years old, with unlimited imaginations and an enthusiasm to create a competitive game out of anything our small village could present to us.  For us, standing next to the woods in the dark was the ultimate test.   

It was the golden age of innocence, we were too young to believe there existed real evil in the world, so we invented our own monsters.  The woods, located behind our primary school, was the perfect environment to act out our wild fantasies and discuss its possible inhabitants – swamp monsters, giant dogs, huge earthworms and, of course, witches.  It was the most mysterious and dangerous place in the village. 

We had been in the woods several times before with our teacher during school hours.  Dense, leafy bushes and towering, ominous trees mixed with nettles and other weeds.  There was a small, murky pond in the middle, covered by algae and waterlilies.  It was nothing special, nor was it even that big, yet there would always be the distant crack of a twig or rustle of a bush which led us to believe we were being watched.  But we had always felt safe because the teacher was there and obviously, in our minds, nothing dangerous could happen with an adult around.

Twenty seconds.  That’s how long I had lasted that night before I sprinted away from the fence in a frenzied state.  It had been a personal record, but I still hadn’t beaten my best friend, Jack, who was still there when I had finally felt safe enough to turn around.  I remember shouting: “You’ve won again, Jack.  Come on, let’s go home.”  But then the bushes below the trees had rustled and out of them had come a man.  Jack had screamed, while I had frozen in terror.  As quickly as he had appeared, the man had left, carrying my friend back with him into the woods, vanishing into the darkness.

Jack was gone.  The man in the woods had been real all along.

Wednesday, 10 August 2016

No Man's Sky - Early Play Review


I spent a good six hours on this last night and discovered and explored eight planets.   I started on a nice, fairly hospitable planet with abundant gold resources which I was able to mine and sell in the market place, giving me a timely boost to funds.   The drones didn’t pester me too much, but they can be annoying.  I have a long way to go to be able to afford a decent starship, which is needed, because you soon fill up your inventory.  It’s actually quite frustrating,  I think they need to raise the maximum limit on the number of resources you can carry at a time.  For example,  a 1000 carbon instead of 250.  You soon hit maximum and end up being told ‘inventory full’ a dozen times.

Overall, it’s a wondrous game, which appeals to the exploratory nature in all of us.  Not knowing what is going to be on the next planet or moon is a thrill - I feel like I’m in Starfleet exploring for the Enterprise.  I think it is a great game to just pick up, on and off, and spend a few hours eating away at.  You could spend your hours just on one planet, or even your whole day.  When you’re not being attacked by pirates and drones, it’s very relaxing especially with the soundtrack.   Piloting your starship is an excellent feeling, even though it took a while to get the hang of the controls - be prepared to hit a few asteroids as you learn the ropes!  The graphics in the space are also mesmerizing sometimes, I spent a lot of time just staring at this beautiful, cyan aurora around one particular planet.

I’d like to see more geographical features on the planets, some higher mountains, deep valleys etc  I’m being picky though, there have been some amazing caves I’ve ventured across and even floating rocks, which were cool.   The fauna is incredible too, I came across a T-Rex like species last night which I accidentally shot and sent into a fit of rage against me.  Unfortunately I had to blow it up with a plasma grenade, which I felt bad about but it was me or him.

Some tips:

The space pirates are brutal and in the early game, I don’t see how it is doable to defeat multiple enemies.  Save your valuables in your exosuit and not your spaceship!  Otherwise when your ship gets destroyed, you will lose everything you’ve been mining the last few hours!

Be nice to the aliens, they always give you good rewards but respect the monoliths and artefacts – don’t go prying into them or you lose credibility.

You need to learn as many new alien words as you can, it’s the only way to make sure the puzzles aren’t a complete guessing game.

Verdict: 4/5

It will be interesting to see how this game develops and the patches and DLC that comes out for it (if any).  It’s got massive potential but could so easily swing the other way, in the light of all the other great games coming out soon and the next few months.  But for now, I’ll be endeavouring to reach the centre of the galaxy.

Tuesday, 2 August 2016

Update

It's been a very long time since I last updated my blog - sorry!


The truth is I have all but given up marketing for my books, nor I am writing anything new.  I want to write, I really do, but I just can’t seem to bring myself to do it.  This was never the case before, writing was always pleasurable and never a chore.  I loved it and I still do, but I don’t have the same enthusiasm for the entire process as when I first self-published back in 2012.  I’m also making very few sales, perhaps it’s the summer or perhaps I’ve just faded into the ranks along with thousands of other KDP authors.


It’s not writer’s block, I have a few ideas for new novels but there’s just no will in me to write.  It’s not about the money, it never has been.  It’s just simply not fun for me anymore to market my books via trawling the forums, contacting reviewers, plugging away on social media etc...  The market is saturated and I think I have to face up to reality: my writing is simply not good enough to be competitive.  Over time the good will always rise to the top and the rest will sink into obscurity.  I got good reviews, I got bad reviews.  Mostly good, so I can take pride in that and I’ve learned a lot from all the feedback about how and where to improve.  I’ve also met some awesome people along the way.


A successful writer once told me if you don’t make it within the first few months on Amazon, you simply won’t make it.  I think this rings true, the odds are stacked against you.    If I was to have another stab at this publishing malarkey, it would probably be via investing more time and effort into contacting literary agents.  I need help, quite frankly.  I can’t do anymore or go any further without an agent. 


I’m still open to interacting with readers and I’ll happily lend out review copies.  I’m keeping all my work live, of course, there is no negative side to this.  Even a bad review is publicity!
For the future I’m going to try and keep this blog up to date with things that interest me – book reviews, film reviews and games!

Wednesday, 10 February 2016

Amazon terms and conditions



Who ever reads the terms and conditions that we actually sign up to? 


Not me.  But I came across this little gem in a forum and I thought I'd share it here also, Amazon either know something we don't - or obviously, I hope - it's an in-joke, to show that people will click 'accept' to anything before reading the terms. 


https://aws.amazon.com/service-terms/


57.10 Acceptable Use; Safety-Critical Systems. Your use of the Lumberyard Materials must comply with the AWS Acceptable Use Policy. The Lumberyard Materials are not intended for use with life-critical or safety-critical systems, such as use in operation of medical equipment, automated transportation systems, autonomous vehicles, aircraft or air traffic control, nuclear facilities, manned spacecraft, or military use in connection with live combat. However, this restriction will not apply in the event of the occurrence (certified by the United States Centers for Disease Control or successor body) of a widespread viral infection transmitted via bites or contact with bodily fluids that causes human corpses to reanimate and seek to consume living human flesh, blood, brain or nerve tissue and is likely to result in the fall of organized civilization.    



Friday, 5 February 2016

Crew 3361



I spent five years on this crew in Oman, on a rotation of 6 weeks on and 3 weeks off.  It was a fully autonomous mobile city in the desert, home to around 400 people - mostly Omani's, Indian's and expats.  I have very fond memories of the people I worked with and I have a lot of respect for them, not just their hard work ethics but their mental strength as well, in terms of saying goodbye to their children for 6 or 8 weeks at a time.  I don't think I could have done that.


I enjoyed the desert environment most of all, it was the closest I've ever felt to being on another planet - a silence and emptiness that is both haunting and mesmerizing.  It's hard to describe unless you experience it, especially compared to the chaos of normal urban life.  There are some images which will stick with me forever: beautiful sand dunes, weathered jebels, utterly flat mud beds, raging wadi's after rainfall and sandstorms rolling in across the horizon.   It was a desert, but it was never just nothing. 


Starting work at 6am in the field every day, I would watch the sunrise for 6 weeks in a row and in the evening, see it go down again to the sound of the call to prayer.  It was a privilege looking back, especially as I can't remember the last time I saw the sunset or sunrise since leaving.  In the winter I'd shiver in the morning under a blanket of fog and in the summer I'd curse how it could be 30'C before 7am.  The heat in summertime was a punishing 50'C.  It was brutal and pushed my physical and mental strength to the limit, but I also thrived off it.  Indiana Jones was my hero growing up, and on my own in the field I got to imagine I was him.  I'd go for runs never knowing what was over the next dune or in an outcrop, it was always an adventure.  Of course most of the area had been scouted already, but it excited me to think that even on the smallest patch of desert I was walking on land that had never been walked on by humans before. 


The low oil price has meant this crew has to shutdown, perhaps it will mobilize again in the future, perhaps not.  But it leaves behind a legacy and expats who will be life-long friends.  Muscat is a beautiful city, perhaps my favourite and Oman a peaceful country, with generous and welcoming people. 



Thursday, 4 February 2016

Drowning in passwords

I'm a data manager, so I'm pretty organized and efficient in most aspects of my life.  But recently, like in the last year or so, I've become so swamped with using dozens of different passwords for websites that I've had to write them all down.  I can't even remember my pin codes sometimes for the different debit/credit cards I have, as I have both UK and Danish bank accounts (plus a work card).  I feel embarrassed by my inability to remember my codes, even though most of them are the same with a number change here or there.


I have various websites through work which require a password change every three months, plus the usual websites which everyone uses: Facebook, Twitter, Gmail.  I wanted to play a little online poker, that was two new passwords - one for the website, one for the card payment website.  I had a courier deliver a package to me, but I was away so I had to sign up to their website to get it re-delivered on a different date. 


Maybe I could de-register from many of the websites, but I know somewhere down the line I'm going to be needing that company again and I can't be bothered to register again.  I'm ranting about a first world problem, I know, but I needed to let it out.


So for now, my master password list is safely hidden.  I hope I'm not the only one who has one, but if I am then maybe I do need to get my memory checked.

Monday, 1 February 2016

A recommendation

I've been self-publishing for nearly four years now and in all that time, I've come across many writers but there has always been one standout writer: David Jester / Eli Yance.  Quite frankly, he is the only one I would truly call a world-class writer out of everyone I've reviewed.


The first Jester novel I read was 'The Line, the Itch and the Rabbit Hole' and I was absorbed by the quality and the honesty of the writing.  Every novella and book he has since released have been huge hits with readers, attracting rave reviews and download levels I could only dream of.  He has since found an agent and a major US publisher - congratulations to him! 


There is always something very readable about his novels, they draw you in instantly and yet the writing isn't padded with waffle.  He knows how to create a story and my favourite book, Consequence, is just crying out to be made into a film.  I wish him well with his publishing future and look forward to reading more of his work.  I'm glad I got to exchange a few emails with him from time to time, plus read and review his work.  He's a decent, down-to-earth guy and someone I think would be cool to grab a beer with.


You can check out his website here:  http://david-jester.com/
and pre-order his bestseller, An Idiot in Love,  a ridiculously funny comedy, here:
http://www.amazon.com/Idiot-Love-Novel-David-Jester/dp/1510700013





Thursday, 5 November 2015

The Gauntlet: A Fantasy Novella

The Gauntlet is now available to buy here:


Amazon UK


Amazon US


For generations, knights from the city of Harwell have bravely entered The Gauntlet: never to be seen again.

Follow Ash, the latest knight to be selected for this most deadly of missions. Confronted with a land strewn with the corpses of those who entered before him and the malicious beasts that stripped them of their lives, Ash must use every drop of his strength and knowledge to survive.

However, he is not alone in his mission to defeat the dark forces that lie inside The Gauntlet. Others also seek to complete The Gauntlet's trials, discover its end and hope to learn the truth behind its existence.

Those that succeed will be empowered beyond their wildest imagination. Those that fail... must die.

Tuesday, 3 November 2015

The Gauntlet: Blurb

For generations, knights from the city of Harwell have bravely entered The Gauntlet: never to be seen again.
 
Follow Ash, the latest knight to be selected for this most deadly of missions. Confronted with a land strewn with the corpses of those who entered before him and the malicious beasts that stripped them of their lives, Ash must use every drop of his strength and knowledge to survive.
 
However, he is not alone in his mission to defeat the dark forces that lie inside The Gauntlet. Others also seek to complete The Gauntlet's trials, discover its end and hope to learn the truth behind its existence. 
 
Those that succeed will be empowered beyond their wildest imagination. Those that fail... must die. 

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Out very soon on Kindle!

Friday, 2 October 2015

Split-Screen Gaming

Some of the best memories I have with my friends involve us playing hours of computer games together, in an attic gaming room where the windows are open and the summer breeze is blowing in. This was all possible due to split-screen games like Goldeneye, Mario Kart and countless other classics.

As I got older I have played games less and work life got in the way, but I always thought I was a little more clued up about the modern gaming world than the average joe. How wrong I was.

Yesterday I went to buy a PS4 and some games for it, but as I browsed through the games I couldn’t help notice how they were all 1 player only. All the fighting games, racing games and shoot-em-ups. Only Fifa was multiplayer. The rest were all network-only multiplayer games.

I was going to buy a PS4 with two controllers but in the end I only got one controller. The shop assistant explained to me that as everything is now online, the split-screen is being removed altogether. When friends play games together now they do so over the network with headsets, and not in each other’s bedrooms high-fiving each other when they complete a mission together. It made me a bit sad actually, as it all seems a bit isolated. I guess that is the way gaming has gone and I’ve completely missed the technology. But give me my N64 and three of my friends in a room any day playing Mario Kart, than hearing them through the headsets hundreds of miles apart.

Maybe I'm being grumpy for no reason, but it's nice if developers kept the option for split-screen gaming there too.    

Saturday, 19 September 2015

The Gauntlet

I am excited to announce my new fantasy novella will be released soon.  

It is called The Gauntlet and focuses on Ash, the latest brave knight to take on the unassailable and fearsome chasm between the Clouded Mountains.  However, once Ash enters The Gauntlet it is clear not everything is as it seems.

Cover release and blurb to follow soon!

Monday, 27 July 2015

Shadows in the Sand - Chapter 4


II

Bayoud,

Nimar,

JD59, Night

 

Another night of doing bugger all and freezing our backside off,” declared Max.

Bayoud shrugged off his friend’s comment as he stood guard during his night shift.  He was proud to stand guard and protect the city he loved.  For him, ninety percent of being a soldier in Nimar was patience, vigilance and self-discipline.  The other ten percent was being brave and heroic when the time came.  Attacks on the city were infrequent – months would go by without any action – but when they did occur, attacks often had fatal consequences and caused huge damage to the city buildings.  What mattered to Bayoud was being ready, for the slightest delay on his part could spell disaster for those he loved and cared for inside the walls.  All newly graduated soldiers started out on watch for the first three years, patrolling the massive outer city wall on a constant twelve hour shift.  Once you ranked up from experience and age, you’d then get the easier jobs of sitting inside coordinating the soldiers or, better yet, be chosen to go on a scouting party like the recent one that had left earlier that day.  Bayoud had grown up listening to the heroic tales of previous Grandmasters and Master soldiers and wanted his name to go down in legend someday as well. Perhaps one day, he would wield the ultra-weapon of his people – the giant axe called, ‘Gravemaker’.

At 6ft 5”, Bayoud was tall but his bones outpaced his muscles and his build was lanky as such.  Smarter than the average soldier, Bayoud’s intelligence had not gone unnoticed by the Masters during his training.  Every soldier was equipped with a 5ft wooden spear and a knife.  Only the Masters and the elders had alternative weapons, passed down from one to another, which were custom-designed and extremely valuable.  Max turned around to survey the town. 

“We should be with the party that left today to kill the snake.  Greater strength in numbers I say.”

“And if the serpent kills all the soldiers, who is then left to defend the city if we’re attacked by golems or the serpent in its vengeance?” responded Bayoud.

The mention of golems – the biggest threat to Nimar – quickly shut Max up.  Bayoud stared intently out into the darkness that enshrouded the lands to the south.  No one had ever ventured south; the early hunters reported a great flat expanse which they called The Void, a nothingness bereft of life, water, and even shrubs, so no one ever went there. But the south intrigued Bayoud, sometimes on the clearest of nights, when the atmosphere had cleaned itself of dust and sand he thought he could make out a faint violet and green tinge to the southern night sky even if no one else could.  Something lay beyond the horizon, of that Bayoud was certain.  Bayoud’s concentration was interrupted – as usual – by Max, returning to the wall after popping down to fill up his water, or so he hoped he could.

“They’re rationing the bloody water again!  I need to drink more water I think, it stings when I piss,” said Max.

“You should go get yourself checked out. It might not be a lack of water.  A sand leech may have crawled inside you during your sleep. It’s a common problem in our quadrant, something about the living conditions being less sanitary and our beds closer to the ground.”

“What would you know about that? Your bed is up on top.”

Bayoud smiled and replied, “The merits of winning the spear throwing trials.  You should have trained harder.”

“It’s your gangly and unnaturally long right arm that is the problem – no one can compete with it.  Fine, after this shift ends I’ll go see a medic.”

“Good, I’ll come with you to make sure you go.  I know you don’t like those cacti needles.”

Max liked to play the tough guy, exaggerating and hamming up the bravado, but Bayoud knew his friend was no natural soldier.  In previous attacks Max had been nowhere, rearing his head only when the danger had passed.  Bayoud sensed Max’s overt swagger was because his friend was actually on edge because the city was emptied of its soldiers, especially Grandmaster Jax. It was the elder who usually took care of any attacks. 

“Here, have some of my water if you’re thirsty,” said Bayoud.

Max gratefully accepted a few swigs of Bayoud’s water.  As a child, Max didn’t know what career he wanted to do and, frankly, he didn’t care. Consequently, he was placed into the soldiers’ quadrant by default like so many of the rest, mainly boys.  Gripping his spear and focused on the surroundings, Bayoud trusted his gut and he sensed that the predators outside the walls were watching and waiting for the very second the soldiers dropped their guard.  The greatest enemy was that which couldn’t be seen.  Bayoud kept a watchful eye on the south, his intuition telling him that one day something would come out of The Void.  It was cold.  The biting wind blew in from the south, but Bayoud would take a night shift in winter over a day shift in summer, when the suffocating heat was at its most unbearable.  Bayoud stretched his fingers and suppressed his yawn from the other soldiers.  It would be a typical night of slow-pacing the wall.

 

 

Athmane and Faria,

Nimar,

JD60, Sunrise

 

 

Faria had hardly slept during the night. She didn’t know if it was excitement or nerves she was feeling but, whatever the emotions might have been, they were too much to allow her to sleep.  Like all of the citizens, she didn’t have many possessions – a satchel bag, water flask and some wooden carvings she had whittled when a teenager.  They were her lucky charms and she had taken them into every exam she took, not that she needed luck.  It hadn’t taken long for her and Athmane to organise their things and they’d said goodnight well before midnight.  Despite Athmane’s advice to not bring much, before leaving the dorm Faria borrowed two more satchels from her sleeping roommates, they wouldn’t notice, and she put some empty slates in them with some chalk.  No one really needed the slates anyway and it was important she could sketch out Helven in detail.

Faria left her dormitory, pausing to look back and reflect if she’d ever see it again.  It might not have been luxurious but it was safety and security – home.  The lands outside were a dangerous place, even in the company of an experienced hunter.  Nimar was quiet at night: only the patrolling soldiers made whispers of noise and Faria’s footsteps crunching along the gravel drew their eyes from high upon the wall.  Most of the soldiers thought nothing of it, just another citizen going to the toilet, yet they did wonder why she had so many belongings with her before she passed out of sight towards the gate.  The wind was cold and Faria already missed the relative warmth of her dorm, she wondered if she’d even be able to cope the first night away. 

 

As the first beams of the rising sun un-blackened the southern sky, Faria waited by the gate and passed the time by watching the soldiers patrol the wall.  She spotted Bayoud and waved to him.  Nearing the end of his shift, Bayoud waved back and smiled, curious as to why she had a rucksack but his eyes didn’t linger on her too long, his supervisor, Master Cawes, was nearby and he kept his eyes fixed on the land outside. 

“Good morning.  If you insist on carrying that extra weight, be my guest, I’m not helping you,” said Athmane.

“I know you advised against it, but I decided not to listen to you.  Besides, Prisa said you’re to assist me however you can and I feel it’s important to detail Helven to the maximum.” 

“I had an inclination you’d ignore what I said! Give me a few satchels then.  But if we’re being chased by a golem, these are getting dropped first.”

Grandmaster Prisa arrived at the gate, pleased to see both hunter and craftswoman were on time and ready for the task at hand.

“Good morning to you both.  I trust your Master explained your mission, Athmane.”

“Keep Faria alive, at all costs.”

“You two were chosen for your youth, dedication and excellence in your fields.  I would like you back here in four or five days to report your findings.  I believe that is ample time, but don’t rush.  It’s important you make a thorough assessment and stay safe,” said Prisa.

Another figure approached from behind Prisa – it was Grandmaster Hawk.

 

Grandmaster Hawk carried his longbow and the deadly black arrows in his quill, twice the size of the conventional arrows.  Sporting a black moustache and stubble, Hawk’s fierce blue eyes shone in the dawn sun and his thick black hair blew in the wind, partially covering his eyes.  Hawk had the air of authority about him, and at the age of fifty he was the youngest elder.  Lean, fit and a handsome face, Hawk assumed command of the hunters and the soldiers in the absence of Grandmaster Jax.      

“Congratulations on your number one ranking.  I hear your skill with a bow is almost as good as mine,” said Hawk.

“I came close to beating your record in the training ground, but narrowly missed out,” replied Athmane.

“You should have no problem using this then.”

Grandmaster Hawk handed Athmane his longbow – the ultra-weapon of his quadrant.

“This is one of the three longbows our quadrant possesses.  I have mine back in the Sanctum, Master Thane has his on the scouting party and now you have the other.  No one has been to Helven in over a hundred years and we do not know what beasts may lurk there.  It would be irresponsible of the city to send two of its most promising people without maximum protection.”

Athmane held the longbow in awe.  Bayoud couldn’t help but notice from the wall and stared at the remarkable scenes involving his friend, not caring anymore about being caught by Master Cawes.  The longbow was the most revered weapons in the hunters’ arsenal.  The three longbows were crafted by Grandmaster Rufus two hundred years ago and they were kept in the Sanctum.  The elder hunter was the only one entitled to the longbow and only he, or she, could decide who could wield the other two.  Lighter than Athmane’s current bow, despite its bigger size, it was made of the strongest wood and had double the range of the other bows. 

“You’ll need these arrows for it as well,” said Hawk. 

Grandmaster Hawk handed Athmane a quill with ten black arrows – oak shafts with obsidian arrowheads. 

“Thank you, I’m overwhelmed. I’ll bring it back in one piece,” replied Athmane. 

“Finally, here is a map of the Helven region with the safe route to the centre.  We’ve done our best to reconstruct it out of the mess of parchments we had and I’ve double and triple-checked it.  I hope it will help, trust your instincts though,” said Prisa.

Prisa ordered the soldiers on the wall to open the gate, Bayoud assisted, and the gate slowly began to open with the rising sun visible through the widening gap.

“All being well, I’ll see you again soon.  Good luck,” said Prisa.

Without hesitation, and happy to escape the city once more, Athmane confidently walked out of the gate with Gryth’s ashes safely in his satchel and the fierce longbow proudly on his back.  Athmane wasn’t a Master, but he sure felt like one now.   Faria followed behind, pausing slightly as she walked on the outside ground. Resisting the urge to looking back, she ran a little to catch up with Athmane and then kept pace. 

On the wall, his shift now over, Bayoud watched his friends leave with curiosity. First the large party of soldiers and now this. He didn’t like not knowing what was going on and he felt like, out of the four of them, he was the one least developing as even Mary was shift supervisor during the day.  Bayoud left with Max to the medical quadrant and then he would try to gather as much gossip as he could from the city. 

Thursday, 23 July 2015

Shadows in the Sand - Chapter 3


Athmane,

Nimar,

JD59, Afternoon

 

 

Athmane was walking through his quadrant where the hunters trained and lived.  This sector was always the busiest, as the elders always placed the greatest emphasis on gathering food.  There always had to be a minimum number of hunters, the city could get by with fewer medics, crafters and soldiers but it would soon collapse without the hunters bringing in the food.  The elders knew exactly the population of their city and the minimum amount of food and water required to sustain them. 

New trainees were busy in the archery range, setting traps in the training ground and studiously listening to all the Masters had to say within the school buildings.  Athmane smiled, he was glad those days were behind him.  Unfortunately, this quadrant was so busy because it also had the highest turnaround rate.  Nearly 30% of new hunters died in their first few months outside the city – snakebites, exposure, dehydration, golem attacks, climbing accidents – it was a tough and merciless world outside the walls.  It all seemed easy to the trainees when they went on field trips with the Masters, but out on their own, it was a different matter.

Currently, there were seventy-two active hunters in the field, ten in the medical quadrant recovering from various injuries and twenty-four Masters.  Athmane proceeded to his Master’s quarters, whose name was Master Doma.   Athmane walked into his Master’s quarters, on the stone wall was a giant chalk drawn map of the area Master Doma was responsible for.  Slates covered his stone desk, each one was a tablet with the symbol of a hunter under his command and, below each symbol, a chalk tally of supplies gathered.  During his active days Master Doma was always glad to have company in the field – unlike Athmane – he loved the sound of his own voice more than anything.

“Welcome back, Athmane.  Unless my tally is wrong, you’re nearly half way to meeting your monthly quota already.  Not bad, you clearly learned from the best,” said Master Doma, smiling and laughing.

Master Doma had always been an optimistic person, he believed in motivation through constantly expressing a positive and joyous outlook on life.  There were much grumpier Masters out there and Athmane appreciated his good fortune.  Master Doma was tanned, with a tuft of blonde hair sticking up above the forehead, although the rest of his hair was receding.  He also sported a patch of black facial hair below his lips.

“The Erevas Outcrop has been very good to me this month and it’s pretty safe.  Life stocks are high at the moment, I feel it could even accommodate more hunters if you so desired,” said Athmane.

“Maybe I’ll rotate a few newbies into there then.  Now, on to business.  I’ve selected you for a mission of the highest importance.  Grandmaster Hawk consulted all the Masters and asked us to call in the best hunter.  Gryth was the best, but he died yesterday. You’re now number one.”

“What happened to him?” Athmane had been good friends with Gryth all through training and they regularly bumped into each other in the field and swapped news, his death came as a sad shock.

“He was bitten by a sand viper and panicked, running back to Nimar instead of staying calm.  He collapsed outside the walls before the medics could revive him.  I’m choosing you to replace him on a mission organised by the elders.  You are to assist a craftsman as he, or maybe she if you get lucky, explores the Helven region.”

“I’m essentially on babysitting duty then?”

“Yes, and you’ll be the best babysitter this world has ever seen.  Keep the crafter alive, that’s your assignment.  Grandmaster Prisa will meet you at the gate in the morning to give you your instructions.”

“I hope I’m not stuck with some old grumpy crafter who can’t keep up.”

“I doubt it.  Grandmaster Hawk said urgency was paramount and fitness was essential.  They won’t send someone who can’t handle the field.”

Athmane thought of Faria, it had to be reason she was called to the Sanctum and he smiled.

“I suggest you get yourself off to medical for a quick check-up and a little clean-up wouldn’t go amiss either. You might be the best, but you stink.  Good luck.”  

Athmane smelled his armpits, perhaps Master Doma had a point.  On the way out Athmane stopped by the archery range, where he deposited the five arrows in his quill and replaced them with repaired ones.  Even emptied of nearly all its soldiers, the city was still too cramped for Athmane’s liking.  After watching the trainees firing at targets in the archery range for a while, Athmane went to his dorm to pick up a satchel and a spare wolf-skin cloak before leaving to the morgue.  The hustle and bustle of the noise reverberated off the stone buildings, while the sun’s heat remained trapped within the narrow gaps and streets.  The breeze did little to quash the heavy and punishing air.

 

The morgue was a small, grim, grey stone building on the outskirts of the hunters’ quadrant nestled up against the wall.  The dead were kept as far away from the rest of the city and their bodies disposed of within hours.  As Athmane entered he saw that a body was already in the fire and smouldering down into ashes.  A hole in the wall channelled the smoke through a wooden pipe out of the city. The smoke was then carried by the prevailing wind away from the city (on a good day). 

“That’s Gryth, I assume?” said Athmane.

“Yes.  Been a busy two days unfortunately, only just got round to burning him,” said Teoth, a trainee hunter in his early teens assigned morgue duty for the week. 

“I want his ashes.  You can use my satchel to put them in.”

“Very well, you can collect the ashes by sunrise.”

Athmane wanted his friend’s ashes so he could scatter them in the wilderness, not here in the city where his soul didn’t belong and would never find peace.  Gryth was a true hunter, his passion for the wilderness and the hold it had on him was obvious to anyone.  Athmane left his satchel and then went to the hunters’ dorm to try and rest. He’d decided to skip the medical check-up – there was nothing wrong with his body.  The dorm was empty most of the time, but today Athmane found two other hunters fast asleep already. 

Using some of his water, he wiped his body and then crushed some juslen herbs, their fragrance masking his body in a sweet and pleasant odour.  Feeling tired all of a sudden, Athmane planned to lie down and collect his thoughts for a few minutes before heading to find Faria. But under the shelter of a roof and the protection of the soldiers on the wall, a deep sleep consumed him.  This part of Nimar Athmane did miss.   

 

 

Athmane and Faria,

Nimar,

JD 59, Evening

 

Faria had finished her day shift.  It had been a long afternoon but fortunately being a supervisor carried with it the power to tell her workers to stop asking questions and to concentrate on their work.  She’d discussed for five minutes with her co-workers, with Master Hamed eavesdropping, that Prisa wanted to know more about the new toilet system design. Yet she could sense their suspicions and unease. 

Faria hurried off to find Athmane in the hunters’ dorm, having expected him visit her. She had, after all, been in the Sanctum – a hugely rare event.  Faria gingerly opened the door.  The last rays of the setting sun shone through the roof and dimly illuminated the room, she saw Athmane fast asleep on the bed.  The room smelled nice, if a little heavy on the sweet side with a touch of spice.  It nearly made Faria sneeze but she repressed it, not wanting to wake the others.

“Athmane,” said Faria, touching him dotingly on his shoulder.

Forgetting where he was, Athmane woke with a jolt and instinctively sprang upright, reaching for his knife.

“It’s me!” shouted Faria.

“Faria!  I thought a golem’s tongue was licking me.”

Faria hit Athmane softly on his arm and said, “My hands aren’t like one of those beast’s tongues!”

“They are quite rough, no offence.”

“Any crafter without rough hands isn’t a true crafter.”

“I didn’t mean to fall asleep.  You’re finished with the Sanctum?”

“Hours ago, I had to go back to my shift but now I’m free to prepare.  I’ve been tasked to go to Helven and evaluate the land for access, with a hunter to guide me.  Are you my hunter?  Is that why you came back?”

“Yes.  It wasn’t due to be me, but Gryth died yesterday.”

“It’s a shame about Gryth; I know you two were good friends.  Did your Master tell you about the mission?”

“Only that I had to guide you and keep you safe.   Helven is a forbidden area for us to go, truth be told I’m a little anxious.”

“Prisa said she will double-check the map Grandmaster Hawk drew tonight and hand it to us tomorrow, supposedly with a safe route through to the centre.”

“I hope she gets the map right, one wrong step and we’re dead if the stories are true.”

“Is that all your Master told you, to guide me?”

“Yes.  Why?  What else is going on?”

Faria whispered into Athmane’s ear everything about the dried-up water pool, Dunein and relocating.  It dawned on Athmane that this was suddenly a lot more than just accompanying a craftswoman. 

“Come, let’s go to your dorm and I’ll help you prepare your things.  I shouldn’t have fallen asleep, everything just got a whole lot more serious.”

“Maybe you were more tired than you realised?”

“I think it was the herbs, perhaps I used too much and the scent knocked me out.”

“It is pretty strong in here, nice though.  You don’t smell bad if that’s any help.”

“Should we tell Mary and Bayoud?” said Athmane.

“Bayoud is on nights, he’s already up on the wall.  He doesn’t like being distracted; you know how he is with duty.  I couldn’t find Mary either, she must be working extra hours and visiting dorms.  We’ll tell them when we return from Helven.” 

This would be the first time since graduation that they would spend more than two days together, and the two friends looked forward to each other’s company.